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Friday, March 04, 2011

Whimprisoned

I do wander aimlessly
As if any hypnotized
Far too many envisage hysterically
Should I remain Whimprisoned.

The verses hide something behind these words. Firstly, the syllables of every word can be found to be in a fibonacci series which is reset after a line. ( 1,1,2,3 1,1,2,3 1,1,2,3,5 1,1,2,3)
Imagine a part of the brain which seems to be controlled by the other sections. This poem describes the part that is trapped in its own whims.

4 comments:

Indrayan Ganguly.... said...

Pretty nice stuff..But dont need to bring maths into creative stuff it can make it boring...language is superb :)

yet2findout said...

are u asking somebody 'Should I remain Whimprisoned?'..

or u decided u 'U Should remain Whimprisoned'..?

Anoop V said...

Kallakkarel!
U must continue writing short poems...I prefer them to loong ones!

shyam said...

thanks everyone