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Friday, March 04, 2011


I do wander aimlessly
As if any hypnotized
Far too many envisage hysterically
Should I remain Whimprisoned.

The verses hide something behind these words. Firstly, the syllables of every word can be found to be in a fibonacci series which is reset after a line. ( 1,1,2,3 1,1,2,3 1,1,2,3,5 1,1,2,3)
Imagine a part of the brain which seems to be controlled by the other sections. This poem describes the part that is trapped in its own whims.


Indrayan Ganguly.... said...

Pretty nice stuff..But dont need to bring maths into creative stuff it can make it boring...language is superb :)

yet2findout said...

are u asking somebody 'Should I remain Whimprisoned?'..

or u decided u 'U Should remain Whimprisoned'..?

Anoop V said...

U must continue writing short poems...I prefer them to loong ones!

shyam said...

thanks everyone